haiku 1 and haiku 2 seem to belong together, don't you think? Both contemplative, thought-provoking. I love it when I can write small verses but too often they splurge. Trimming can be a pain.
Yes indeed. Very perceptive of you. Both written at the same time. Real Haiku is so damn difficult isn't it? 17 syllables of 5, 7, 5. Only those marvelous orientals could devise such a discipline.
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